Detailed description of the first 3 minutes of my film

Detailed description of the first 3 minutes of my film

The 4 main characters are sat around a camp fire in a wooded area, can be set at dusk or early morning. They are talking about how the world went to pot. The screen then goes black and you can hear sirens and devastation. The characters are discussing the law the government passed. The screen will then transition to another scene, flickering transition, to a new room where a scientist is talking to the camera about the new law that everyone must give a sample of their DNA to the officials who will use it to help prevent crime. The camera then flickers/ fades back to the main characters sat around a campfire. They then say that after that there was rioting and, looting as the people were not happy with the new law that was passed. The scene then cuts to footage of buildings on fire and mobs running through the streets. When it cuts back the camera then cuts to footage (looking through a man’s eyes) as he’s stumbling towards the group in the woods. We then see a hand grabbing one of their shoulders and they turn around and scream. The camera then does a shot reverse shot of the person whom the hand belongs too and it’s a clone of the same person. With the camera placed on the floor looking up at his clone, the camera is drifting in and out of focus. The camera then re focuses on all the characters. They are the top of a hill and are holding hands in a circle as a plan approaches. Then all of a sudden the screen goes black. The next scene the camera is positioned laid down on the floor (in 1^st person again).He can see one of his fellows hitting the dead clone on the floor with a baseball bat, he’s been set on fire. He’s out of breath and panicking. End of 3 minutes.